2 thoughts on “Dont Hold Your Breath

  1. Major overkill. If it can’t be said in a few words it loses it’s edge and, in this case, becomes preachy.

    Isn’t that what you’re fussing about in the first place?

  2. Yeah, I recognized it’s preachyness when I submitted it after some hesitation. So far it’s at the bottom of my submissions.

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